Thursday, March 16, 2017

Metaphors

One of the activities that we had to complete for the NZ Writing Kit was to write a metaphor about ourselves. 

First of all we needed to learn about metaphors.
Mathew is a popcorn all alone under the chair slowly rotting away.
Caylee is a dirty black sock.
Jerome is a smooth racing car with golden wheels.
Josiah is a hungry dinosaur.
Imogen is a huge towering sky scraper.
Charlie is a zooming race car.
Kate is a cheeky monkey swinging from tree to tree.
Aaliyah is a fast zooming car.
Taine is a ripped Te Rapa shirt lying on the wet soggy grass.
Jasnoor is a shop selling food.
Kaya is a red, flowing dress waiting for someone to be interested.
Jackson is the Eiffel Tower.
Pepuere is a flaming red porsche.
Zoe is a a burger with double cheese, double lettuce, double tomato, double mayo, sort of like a big Mac but bigger and better.
Shanil is a flaming soccer ball.
Ava is a single chip going cold on the side of a lonely plate.
Troy is a drifting GTR Skyline.
Quartez is a little lonely cabin in a little forest.
Kredenz is a flat All Black shirt supporting Jonah Lomu. RIP
Maee is a yummy, delicious Big Mac burger with sauce.
Carmelo is a Big Mac Mcdee.
Cyrus is a delicious KFC fish combo.
Alexus is a flaming hot steak waiting to be demolished.
Jaskirat is a blue hockey tshirt that has a H.E.S logo on it.
Maria is a cat with super hearing ears ready to hunt!
Anika is a big white glitter house.
Subair is a zooming flash cheetah.
Jahquinia is a rainbow unicorn racing car.
Barney is a golden go-cart.
Andy is a fiery red car.
Max is a black panther.
Whaea Kat is an old worn handball hidden in the long grass on the nature trail.

5 comments:

  1. I loved carmelo's metaphor it cracked me up by Ashen and Dakota Room9

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  2. I like all of your class's metaphores.
    they could of been a bit longer.
    I think that they were still good though
    From Tristan Rm 9

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  3. I like your metaphor's room 8.And maybe next time you can make a google slide of it.

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  4. Wow room 8 we really like your metaphors.I think that you guys should add some more metaphors because they sound so interesting but anyway they are still good though. From Uaniva and Jamie.L Rm9

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  5. I like your metaphor's.and and next time you can you can make a slide of it.

    by Ahmed and Jonathan

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