Retelling the story of RAP-unzel by Gursimran

Why Gursimran is a good writer - "My writing is good because it has details and I remembered heaps of stuff from my brainstorm. I usually write just a tiny bit but this time I wrote five and a quarter pages."

Title: RAP-unzel (retelling the story of the show RAP-unzel)

Today on X factor Idol there is a talent show and some of the characters were Aladdin, Jack and the Beanstalk, Jake and Jill and RAP-unzel and Simon Cow is the judge and this is the final talent show. He kept on saying to the talent "I don't mean to be ruuuude" but the last talent was very very great and RAP-unzel had the voice of a giant angel. 

RAP-unzel's Dad wanted her to sign the contract to have $300, 000 but Rapunzel did not want to sing a silly song "Oh baby I'm beautiful, Oh baby your'e beautiful, Oh baby we're beautiful, Oh baby!". 

Rapunzel has one thing left and it is the garden window in her home and the government took the window away and Rapunzel and her Dad are very very very poor. Rapunzel's fake sister was doing a trick on Rapunzel and she said to go to the studio at the castle and Rapunzel was pranked by her fake sister and Rapunzel got locked in the castle. Simon Cow told her to sing in the microphone and it was one more trick and Simon Cow stole Rapunzels voice of singing but she can talk.

Prince Rupert was riding his horse away from the palace so he can rap. His father the King came to his son and he told Prince Rupert to sing but Prince Rupert can't sing but he can rap. The King said to the horsey "make yourself comfy". Prince Rupert saw Rapunzel up in the castle and it is locked and Prince Rupert gave his clock to Rapunzel so she knows when it is 7 o'clock to meet Prince Rupert again. 

Rapunzel saw the beanstalk grow and she escaped from the castle. Simon Cow said the sister of Rapunzel sang the silly song to have $300,000. Rapunzel ruined her voice and said "She is not Rapunzel and I am really the real Rapunel. Simon Cow said "You are not the real Rapunzel"
"But I am the real Rapunzel and you are lying", so the real Rapunzel took off the fake hair. Then Prince Rupert and Simon Cow said if you want to have your voice back yo have to kiss Prince Rupert and she had her singing voice back and she can sing again (but really the voice came from the radio).